100 Word Challange Week #13
"Oooh, what does this button do?" Said Space cat. "It must say lunch!" Thought Space cat. She walked out of the space ship and told Space doge what she did. "you did what?!" yelled Space doge. "That wasn't the lunch button it was the the luanch button!" "Oh, sorry." said Space cat regretfully. suddenly a magical midget with a really long beard ran out from under a bush "Quick, get him!" exclaimed Space doge. They chased him but eventualy grew tired. More midgets ran around. They tryed to chase them but they were exhausted .
Hello Gobbstopper,
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting use of the prompt. You have a strong opening sentence to grab the reader’s attention. Well done. Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. wizard and spell. You would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling and grammar mistakes. Keep on writing and learning.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Van