Week #3 100 Word Challenge

"Ha ha!" said the wizard as he cast a spell. it hit Prince Charming right in the chest. "Oooofff!" he screamed. He had an allergic reaction! The princess tore her eyes from her head and through them into the forest. "You are a bad and mean wizard!" she yelled, then imeedietly dabed savegely. she did some sort of karate kick and knoked the wizard out. Prince Charming stole the wizard's wand and cast a spell at the princess to destroy her, but it seemed to be going backwards towards him. PPOOOOFFF!!!!! He disappeared. The princess won again. Nom.  oh, the dragon ate her. ugh. gross.

Comments

  1. Hello Gobbstopper,
    This is an interesting use of the prompt. You have a strong opening sentence to grab the reader’s attention. Well done. Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. wizard and spell. You would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling and grammar mistakes. Keep on writing and learning.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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